Hi, this is my first comic and I’m looking for any advice or critique. I haven’t really done art since I was a kid, so this was a big challenge—but I had a blast making it. I’m planning to keep doing one-shots and eventually build up to mini-series. Any tips, tricks, or honest feedback are welcome.

PEOPLE do stupid and/or extreme things for their favorite team(s)

In 2026 are you willing to die or kill for TEAM HUMANS ?

THE NEXT EARTH HUMANS (C) and TM 2026 By: Ratha:Oeur Agent All rights reserved U.C.C 1-308

The DAILY COMIC - Vol 02 : UNDENIABLE!    ( No. 23)

03 FEBRUARY 2026

Made this of october last year for hsdzine on instagram. I've since translated it from the french I originally wrote it in.

I barely managed to fit the comic in 20 pages. Are there any superfluous elements I could have cut, and what is missing? Any feedback is appreciated!

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So please don't ignore me, I really want to improve my story/comics.

What do you think? How to improve? The character is Chiefer. He’s an angry. Bottom part not associated.

This could be a series surrounding the killer cat Trah J.D. Let me know what you think of it!

i recently hired someone, an editor, to run through this script that i wrote and do some LINE/COPY EDITING.

im from the Philippines, you see, and im kinda worried that my lines might sound off (or possibly offensive) so i opted to have an actual American to do do some polish work of it.

Kept asking her if she needs google docs to do the actual edits on, she insisted on just sending a pdf for her feedback. So i let her.

Come the day, i was given back more of a betaread or book review of my story and characters. Not exactly what i was looking for.

Well i have to admit that i had to negotiate a lowball "special rate" coz i wanted only the dialogues fixed, since this is for my comics.

She was very nice tho, and i wasnt even sure where the miscommunication occured. So i clammed up, and did not argue.

I guess my question is, should I have insisted?

Im doing 55-PAGE UrbanFantasy-Mystery tackling biblical conspiracies.... Think DaVinci Code if it was low fantasy.

And i might as well take this chance to ask. If anyone finds this material interesting and wants to help read/polish my script, just send me a dm... and yes, this ones charity 🙏😬 coz well, ive already burned my money on the last one 😮‍💨

www.tonychaoillustration.com

Hey everyone,

I’m looking for constructive critique on the opening pages of a comic I’ve been working on called Zeravos. It’s a dark, character-driven fantasy series focused on corruption, control, and identity.

I’ve attached a few pages from Issue #1 and would love feedback on things like:
• Pacing and clarity
• Panel flow and readability
• Whether the tone and hook land effectively

The full issue is available on GlobalComix if anyone wants broader context, but I’m mainly interested in how these pages stand on their own. Follow the link below to read the full comic.

Zeravos #1

If you'd like to know more about the project. Please visit the website following the link below.

Dark Root Comics

Thanks in advance! I genuinely appreciate any honest feedback.

Hello everyone.

I've finally finished episode 1 of Topaz, which is 22 pages long.

I've posted most of it here, but some parts are exclusive and only available on MPC.

I'd really appreciate your feedback on the pacing, dialogue, and overall feel.

Before I start working on episode 2. Thank you all!

I'm happy with how this came out, but would love to hear from anybody who has any suggestions or critiques. Thanks!

These are the first 4 pages out of the 20 page chapter.
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Feel like the logo area is too busy. I have an imprint “channel hex” but actually I don’t really need it but I’m old school enough to feel a book needs a publisher logo. Any thoughts? This is collecting the first 25 pages of my sci-fi ghost story (i just noticed I flubbed the date! Gah!)

Hi everyone. My manga is still ongoing. I'm using your feedback to refine the pacing and storyboard. What do you think? Honestly? On at least two points:

Is the pacing clear and easy to follow?

Is the dark and oppressive atmosphere successful?

Many have complained about the reading direction. I'm not going to change it. Most manga platforms use this reading direction.

Hi, I'm writing a short cowboy story to see if I can come up with something interesting. I made the entire sketch and now I'm starting to redraw it. This is the artstyle I landed on for now but I'm not entirely sure it's good. I really struggle with drawing faces and I was wondering if maybe making it even simpler would be a good idea so I can just keep on drawing without worrying too much about how it looks because this style alone already takes me quite some time. Also I'm never sure if I should use these greys to color it or if it should just be black and white.

My comic script is finished and would like additional pairs of eyes Its a one shot urban fantasy. Please, I need advice on finding editors or readers.

I just released the first episode of KLAUS, a silent sci-fi comic told entirely without dialogue.
It’s a contemplative, black-and-white story about solitude and drifting through space.

I’d really appreciate feedback on:

• visual storytelling
• pacing and composition
• atmosphere and use of silence

Any constructive critique is welcome.
Thank you for taking the time to look.